Issue numfocus#246 fixed

Author: SoumyaPatnaik1808

DISCOVER/06_childcare.md

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 ## Grants 
 
-   - Based on our research, grants to cover childcare costs seem to be more popular with attendees. (On-site childcare services can be costly for attendees because of additional travel costs for bringing children along.) 
+   - Our recent survey shows that grants to cover childcare costs are popular with attendees. (On-site childcare services can be costly for attendees because of additional travel costs for bringing children along.) 
       - You might survey your participants to determine their preference for grants vs. on-site childcare services.
       - Be sure to consider issues like whether grant recipients will need to submit an invoice or receipt from someone (the childcare provider) with a Tax ID.
   - For those who do bring kids to the event/conference: