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Some editorial changes up through end of section 3.2
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Expand Up @@ -144,11 +144,11 @@ protocol constraints. For instance, protocols that use 8-bit fields may
find it too costly to dedicate many grease values, while 32-bit or 64-bit
fields are likely to have no such limitations.

It is recommended to use an algorithm to reserving large sets of values.
For example, {{QUIC}} uses and algorithm of `31 * N + 27` to allocate
transport parameters grease values.
It is recommended to use an algorithm to reserve large sets of values.
For example, {{QUIC}} uses an algorithm of `31 * N + 27` to allocate
grease values for transport parameters.

One possible problem with some algorithms is how they will spread out
One possible problem with some algorithms is that they will spread out
values over the space, and impact the ability to use or reserve contiguous
blocks of non-grease values. It is common for protocol extension designers
to want to reserve contiguous blocks of codepoints in order to aid
Expand All @@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ IANA registries that contain reserved grease values must indicate that
the values are reserved. The specifics of how to represent the reservations
is up to the documents that define the registries.

Some registries list out the reserved grease values specifically, marked as
Some registries list out the reserved grease values individually, marked as
"Reserved". For example, the TLS registry uses this approach
(https://www.iana.org/assignments/tls-parameters/tls-parameters.xhtml).

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## Use Unpredictable Grease Values

In order to gain the benefits of active use and avoid ossification, grease values
need to be sent in ways that won't become a predictable pattern that implementations
used in actual packets
need to be sent in ways that won't become a predictable pattern that receiver and
middlebox implementations
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I don't think this is necessarily specific to protocols with packets or that have traditional middleboxes intercepting them (although those are common cases)

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"middlebox" was already used in line 88, and so my PR is consistent with existing text.

Feel free to suggest alternate text for both this and line 88, though perhaps in a separate PR?

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Alternative ideas

  • used in packets => used in the wire image
  • middle box => on-path observers

and deployments ossify around.

Implementations that generate grease values should pick unpredictable entries
from the set of reserved grease values. It is most important that values be
unpredictable across the set of all protocol participants for particular deployments.
This can be achieved in multiple ways: for example, an individual client device
This can be achieved in multiple ways: for example, an individual sender
might pick random values from the grease value space on each interaction;
alternatively, a single client could pick a specific grease value to use, while
other clients pick other values.
alternatively, a single sender could pick a specific grease value to use, while
other senders pick other values.

In order to support picking unpredictable values, the set of reserved values
should be large, when possible. See {{define}} for a discussion of how to allocate
Expand All @@ -205,7 +207,7 @@ can be made unpredictable. Implementations can vary their behavior by including
no grease values, one grease value, or multiple grease values for a given protocol
extension point.

How consistently an frequently to use grease values is a choice that implementations
How consistently and frequently to use grease values is a choice that implementations
and deployments need to consider and weigh against several factors.

Deployments of greasing should consider how they expect errors exposed by
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# Considerations for Increasing Protocol Variability {#variability}

Greasing can maintain protocol extensibility by falsifying active use of its
extension points. However, greasing alone does not ensure positive use of extension mechanisms. A protocol may
extension points (see {{Section 3.3 of VIABILITY}}). However, greasing alone does not ensure positive use of extension mechanisms. A protocol may
define a wide-ranging extension capability that remains unused in the absence of
real use cases. This can lead to ossification that does not expect extensions,
leading to interoperability problems later on.
Expand All @@ -329,7 +331,7 @@ extension points positively. To some extent this can be thought of as protocol
fuzzing. This might be difficult to exercise because varying the protocol
elements might change the outcome of interactions, leading to real errors.
However, some protocols allow elements to be be safely changed, as shown in the
following examples.
following example.

## Example: QUIC frames

Expand All @@ -344,8 +346,8 @@ reassemble frames, which could arrive in any order, into an ordered reliable
byte stream that is readable by applications.

A form of positive testing is for a sender to unpredictably order the STREAM
frames that it transmits. For example, varying the sequence order of offset
values. This allows to exercise the QUIC reassembly features of the receiver
frames that it transmits. For example, the sender can vary the sequence order of offset
values. This allows exercising the QUIC reassembly features of the receiver
with the expectation that no failure would occur. However, doing this may
introduce delay or stream head-of-line blocking that affects the performance
aspects of a transmission, which may not be acceptable for a given use case. As
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